hmm have to say i agree about the drop esp as you’re going for that type of dubstep (typical ‘wobble’ dance floor). personally more into burial-esque db which can pull off not having a massive drop but thats cos it has so many little builds and samples etc. Reckon you might need to shorten or add more to the intro. Needs progression??
its cool though and def got rythm just maybe need to focus on the structure.